You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. Ypu are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.
Hello, Mr. Medved,
I am writing to you because I have just moved in my new flat downstairs from you. My name is Olga Karaseva, my husband`s name is Maksim. We are glad to meet you. We are really delighted to our new place. It has 3 bedrooms, the balcony and one enormous kitchen. Also it has huge garden outside and we are gong to hold a party there.
We are planning the great party with our friends, relatives and we would like to invite all neighbours. I would appreciate if you could attend our party next Sunday the 3rd of July. We are going to order pizza and sushi and have some kind of win and beer. However if you want, you can take all kind of food and drink with you. Also we are going to invite a clown, who is really fun so you should take your children with you, if you have them. We hope it would be a perfect event.
I look forward to seeing you.
Yours faithfully,
Olga and Maksim.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-09-13 | Olga Karaseva | 56 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 267, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
..., the balcony and one enormous kitchen. Also it has huge garden outside and we are g...
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Line 5, column 257, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...shi and have some kind of win and beer. However if you want, you can take all kind of f...
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Line 5, column 328, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ke all kind of food and drink with you. Also we are going to invite a clown, who is ...
^^^^
Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rward to seeing you. Yours faithfully, Olga and Maksim.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, really, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 743.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.22159090909 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21628056327 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585227272727 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8296567697 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.0714285714 76.5299724578 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5714285714 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182659408344 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618085629847 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567918290983 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115924624685 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375435837722 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.7 8.37731958763 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.31 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.38 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.