Some people like to work for a few months in a year and for the rest of the time, they do what they like.
Do the advantages of this job pattern outweigh its disadvantages?
Over the past few decades, the level of work-stress of people has increased to a greater extent. Owing to this, they are following different ways to distance themselves from these stressful work-lives such as not working for the whole twelve months. Although this work pattern rejuvenates the energy level, in my opinion, the demerits of losing a current job and interest in work, far-out space its advantage.
To begin with, undoubtedly performing the task of one's own interest by taking few months gap from the tiring work boost the energy and enthusiasm. The reason for this is people usually gets exhausted while doing the same routine works and a little distance from hectic life and indulgence in their interests makes them happy and contended. For example, most of the Hollywood stars work for only six months and the rest of the time they spend with their family and friends, as they believe rest from work in necessary for a productive life. However, this is possible for the occasional wealthy workers such as actors and photographers, not feasible for a middle-class working employee.
Nevertheless, despite the aforementioned advantage, there are a plethora of detrimental impacts of this trend. The first and foremost is that a long term absence of an individual from the job can result in their termination. This is because, in this competitive era, employers do not bear the cost of absentees and often recruit their replacement in no time. For example, in most of the multinational companies, employees are mostly terminated after the absence of one month. Another crucial demerit is that detaching from work for the duration of several months can lead to the loss of interest in it. It often becomes difficult for the workers to cope up with the basic job life, consequently, this leads to their low performance.
In conclusion, even though doing no work for a few months can refresh the mind and body, in my perspective, this burgeoning phenomenon can cause job termination and the abolition of interest in current work. Therefore, the drawbacks of this way of working definitely surpass its merit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'months'' or 'month's'?
Suggestion: months'; month's
...task of ones own interest by taking few months gap from the tiring work boost the ener...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07407407407 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83135560126 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561253561254 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2463178206 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.733333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365247858339 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121870780475 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664482991135 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234415227198 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479564210137 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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