In ancient times, many works were done at home using a hand. However, these days, due to technological advancements, most are performed using artificial machines. Saving time and working smartly is the biggest advantage and depending on machines without learning the skill to do by hand is the primary disadvantage of this tendency.
Due to the developments in technology, it is undeniable that humans are benefited, and the primary ones are, saving time. To elaborate, these days every individual is striving hard to live a luxurious life in the future, and the technological equipment is a boon to them because they can complete any kind of works smartly and save the time. For instance, due to the washing machine, mixie grinder, dishwasher, vacuum cleaner and many more, almost 80% of the people around the globe are able to save their precious time; thus spending with their children or work.
On the other hand, there are drawbacks to this development, the predominant one being, lack of knowledge. To elucidate, as modern people are depended on the electronic equipment, they do not have basic awareness of completing the works using hands. To exemplify, most recent demographics have shown that the people in the USA, Canada and the United Kingdom do not have the basic knowledge to complete the works if at all the equipment is damaged. Another disadvantage of modern equipments is that, as people are dependent on them, ultimately they are putting on the weights and many are suffering from health-related issues.
To conclude, modern appliances are invented to make people’s life easier such as, save time and they are successful in that, however, lacking in basic awareness is a huge disadvantage to mankind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, thus, for instance, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14487632509 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90168192937 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565371024735 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.0637261883 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.363636364 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7272727273 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166280520994 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715828591181 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070446842715 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106166169471 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101705640201 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.