Environmental pollution is big problem in modern society. last many years the garbage are rises cross the globe due to the many factors. Here i will discuss many point in rest of the paragraph.
To begin with, many factors are responsible for the environmental pollution, first and for most is pollution which is increased day by day,this is the huge issue around the planet. many people buy products they do not need and end up with landfills production of excessive wastes. For instance, scientifically proven that materialistic like plastics are not degraded in the environmental for several thousand hundred years. More consuming produced more wastes.
Primarily, government should take step against using all this non biodegradable products. Also organized some awareness program which is related to the environment. In many countries also banned which is not decomposed in the environments. For example Europe now use rubbish to build road by converting plastics to adhesive substance. This technology should be imported so the amount of waste would be reduced.
In recapitulate, there is no denying that people all over the world are producing rubbish materials. government should also take steps against this and also encourage to use biodegradable waste.
- Human activity has had adverse effects on plants and animals. Some people think that its too late to solve this issue, while others believe that necessary steps should be taken to overcome this problem.Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 67
- Some people think that in order to prevent illness and disease governments should make efforts in reducing environmental pollution and housing problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 75
- The bar shows numbers of marriages and divorces and marital status in 30 years from 1970 in America. 73
- The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- Some people think that in order to prevent illness and disease, governments should make efforts in reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many points
...o the many factors. Here i will discuss many point in rest of the paragraph. To begin w...
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... and end up with landfills production of excessive wastes. For instance, scientif...
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...e steps against this and also encourage to use biodegradable waste.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1075.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 198.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42929292929 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01015609061 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641414141414 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9097962978 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7857142857 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1428571429 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136507314689 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044060037882 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495511983365 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765459224364 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328046576333 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.62 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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