“Should teenagers spend more time on such cultural activities as enjoying music or theatre, etc and less time on sports? Why or Why not? ”
As we know, cultural activities are very important to teenagers. However, I don’t think that they should spend more time on these activities instead of playing sports. This essay will describe the reason I disagree with this statement.
Sports help young people fit both physically and psychology. Mahatma Gandhi said:” It is health that is real wealth and not pieces of gold and silver.” Unless we are inactive, we will not have enough health to enjoy other activities. For instance, sports help people to have good health and relax. Participation in sports makes them prevent disease like heart disorders, obesity, etc. Consequently, when they would be healthy, they could take part in lots of indoor and outdoor activities.
The next importance for youth to play sports is to learn teamwork. As a member, teenagers can learn how to interact with others and know what the power of the team is. This experience will help them to succeed in the future. So, when they play sports, they can receive some skills and lesson for their life.
For, all things considered, the youths ought to play sports in line with participation in cultural activities. It seems that nobody will spend time in cultural activities while they are ill. I believe that the more they do exercise, the healthier they are.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, so, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1100.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04587155963 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63357089301 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614678899083 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2078337744 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3333333333 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5333333333 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198493097395 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638757840591 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756179750009 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126686303646 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686559628407 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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