Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
new Roman';font-size:10.5000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;">it is more and more important for people to reduce their living expenses because of inflation. Some people may suggest buying the new technology products less frequently is a good potion. I hold that finding a roommate that can share the expenses is a better choice.new Roman';font-size:10.5000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;">
new Roman';font-size:10.5000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;">finding a roommate that can share the expenses means people can reduce living expenses dramatically. living expenses can be reduced dramatically because house rents account for a huge part of people’s life expenses. having a roommate to afford rents together means people only need to pay fifty percent of whole rents. On the contrary, money paid for new technology products is little compared to rents. Even if people buy the new technology products less frequently, their living costs may only drop five percent. For example, I had to pay five hundred dollars for the rents for house per month. I always needed to borrow money from others to cover my living expenses. I found a roommate that can share the fee later, so I only need to pay two hundred and fifty dollars per month. two hundred and fifty dollars are a large amount of money to me given that my total expenses were six hundred dollars.new Roman';font-size:10.5000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;">
new Roman';font-size:10.5000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;">finding a roommate that can share the expenses is a quick way to reduce living expenses. it is easy because there are a lot of people want to find a roommate for the same purpose in society. quickness is crucial because the faster people find a roommate means more money that people save. In contrast, people may buy new technology twice a year. it is very inefficient for people to reduce life costs. Chinese people is a case in point. In 2018, China Daily conducted a survey on why people want to find a roommate as a mean to reduce costs targeting six thousand citizens from several first-tier cities nationwide. Over eighty percent of the respondents rated that they can easily find a roommate as one of the top three answers. they also listed the following reasons: they can have a lot of ways to find a roommate like Internet, advertisements and so forth. Most of them succeeded in finding a roommate in one week. they saved at least six hundred dollars from this efficiency.new Roman';font-size:10.5000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;">
new Roman';font-size:10.5000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;">finding a roommate that can share the expenses means you have a monitor to control your money. roommates become monitors because they need people to pay their duty fees every month. A monitor is vital since it is very difficult for people to control their own people. By contrast, through shopping for less expensive food and cooking at home cannot achieve that goal. For instance, my father had a roommate when he started working in 24. His roommate always pay attentions to my father’s money given that he wanted to make sure that he did not have to pay rents alone by the end of the month. With the help of the roommate, my father spent little money on things unnecessary and greatly reduced the life expenses.new Roman';font-size:10.5000pt;mso-font-kerning:1.0000pt;">
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, at least, for example, for instance, in contrast, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2883.0 1977.66487455 146% => OK
No of words: 513.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61988304094 4.8611393121 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75914943092 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.53349394378 2.67179642975 282% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.43469785575 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 838.8 618.680645161 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.4477989763 48.9658058833 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.777777778 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.37037037037 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0217201513198 0.236089414692 9% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00906494340587 0.076458572812 12% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0150705278003 0.0737576698707 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0171817406057 0.150856017488 11% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0109337345866 0.0645574589148 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 10.9000537634 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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