You are arranging a conference with colleagues in a different department. Write to your colleague to make their arrangements.
• You should include the main topic of the conference
• Your preferred speaker for the conference
• The type of food and the refreshment you would like
Dear Suraj
I am writing this letter in connection with the conference which is supposed to be held next week with our Analytics department.
As you know the agenda of our conference is to decide the marketing strategies for our upcoming products. Everyone's eye is specifically fixed for the new plan. Moreover, the existing product strategy also needs some attention later in the conference. I would ask you to make proper arrangements as required.
Also, I suggest to appoint Mr. Praful as our speaker for the entire presentation. We all are well aware he has an exceptional analytical skills along with the great presentation knowledge. He has already been in the analytics department before, so that is an additional advantage for us.
The entire meeting is going to take around 4 hours so we cannot keep a lunch program. Instead I would suggest to have a brunch that includes tea, coffee and sandwiches. Apart from this I would be pleased to have any other suggestions from your end too.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Your's faithfully
Urvashi
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-09-15 | Urvashi Singh | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 9, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest appointing'.
Suggestion: suggest appointing
... arrangements as required. Also, I suggest to appoint Mr. Praful as our speaker for the entir...
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Line 13, column 138, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'skill'?
Suggestion: skill
... aware he has an exceptional analytical skills along with the great presentation knowl...
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Line 17, column 87, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
...ours so we cannot keep a lunch program. Instead I would suggest to have a brunch that i...
^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 103, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest having'.
Suggestion: suggest having
...t keep a lunch program. Instead I would suggest to have a brunch that includes tea, coffee and ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, well, apart from, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07777777778 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84949096602 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683333333333 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9676354022 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.3076923077 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8461538462 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203473925148 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631873534565 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533883516933 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956726646962 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523598825818 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.