Professional workers like doctors, nurses and teachers make a greater contribution to society and so should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often said that doctors,nurses and teachers are second form of god and they both play crucial role for society as well as nations. Due to these, a vast amount of salaries should be provide them as compare with sports players and actors because they both are doing lots of efforts for communities. However, I strongly agree with this notion because doctors and nurses helpful to improve health of patients and educators build a good students.
The main benefit to be give more money to doctors and nurses is that they both are essential to provide proper treatments to patients as well as nurses give better care to their patients in hospitals. In addition to this, the duty of both demands for 24 hours the reason is that any emergency regarding patient’s health will be coming any time so they both try to well prepared for those situations. Moreover, doctors and nurses have no greed for anything and without any hope they honestly do their duty. Apart from this, the work of hospitals want physical and mental strength from doctors and nurses so they ready around o clock to provide it. For example, a survey by newspaper reported that a majority of nurses from Rajindra hospital Patiala doing protest against regime for secure their jobs and increase salaries which survey shows the conditions of nurses in hospitals.
The another advantage should be paid more teachers is that trainer are necessary part of children’s growth because a good teacher can build a best student and instructors give lots of efforts in learner’s development. In other words, a educator do their work properly to educate students without any selfishness the reason is that if a children would be big businessman or wealthy man in future than it’s beneficial for children not for teacher. Even though, a teacher will mentally prepare them for this duty because this job required a huge amount of mental abilities. Furthermore, majority of trainers giving free tuitions to poor children to be teach them for upcoming periods. For instance, in 2017, in punjabi university Patiala a vast amount of teachers caught by police and send them into jail because they both on strike to make their jobs permanent and rise their income.
In conclusion, although, it is true that doctors,nurses and teachers are playing a role of god in society because they both useful for the growth of communities and doing their work without any hopes so it’s mandatory for authorities to provide more income to them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, honestly, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2089.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 420.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97380952381 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67218816126 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507142857143 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.9 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.3838328459 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.214285714 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8571428571 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167698981972 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680757871045 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350824627861 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121936717586 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188565618585 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.