The table below provides information on rental charges and salaries in three areas of London.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The table shows two sets of related information of renting three different types property in three suburbs of London and the kind of annual salary required to earn in these areas.
From these three areas have mentioned, Notting Hill is the most expensive area with weekly rents starting at ￡375 for one bedroom. It raise to ￡738 per week for a 3-bedroom property. People are required to earn approximately ￡100,000 for the lowest standard property, and if renting the 3-bedroom one, ￡200,000 per year salary are needed. Fulham is the cheapest one and the rents ranging from ￡215 per week for a one bedroom property to ￡600 per week for a 3-bedroom property. Salaries are needed to be somewhere between ￡56,500 and ￡157,500.
Finally, Regent's Park might be the best choice for people who able to pay in the middle price range for accommodation whose price from ￡325 (one bedroom) to ￡650 (three bedroom).
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 135, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'raises'?
Suggestion: raises
...ts starting at ￡375 for one bedroom. It raise to ￡738 per week for a 3-bedroom proper...
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Line 9, column 59, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a able'.
Suggestion: who is a able
...ark might be the best choice for people who able to pay in the middle price range for ac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 779.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05844155844 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53516340026 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603896103896 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7834786816 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.285714286 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144183561057 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728125011083 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505637219779 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111402781758 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540802984705 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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