Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own money at young age.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today's world, financial management is a crucial part of all people activities. Some people believe that children should manage their own money when they are younger and be responsible for their spending. I, personally, agree with this idea and think it will help children in their future life and will make them more prosperous. In the following paragraphs, I explain my reasons to clarify my viewpoint.
To begin with, be responsible for spending money face children with different financial situations and force them to decide how to solve it. Children who are managing their money, who give a regular salary from their parents, may suffer from a shortage of money at the end of the month. In this situation, they should try to find a way to get rid of this hard situation. In this way, they learn how to plan for their use of the money during the month. Moreover, it will be a great opportunity for them trying to find a job due to solving their economic problems. Such problems might occur for them in their future life, but they are trying how to deal with them and how to find a way to overcome them, then, they can have a lot of useful experiences which will help them how to deal with their financial difficulties when become an adult.
Second, children try to save some parts of their money in order to buy what they like in the future if they become capable to manage their source of funding properly. Saving money, especially in today's world which financial situations are not well, is very important and help people provide their requirements readily. My experience when I was a kid is a convincing example of this. My father paid me a special amount of money and I should spend it for a month for transportation to school and buy food. One day I saw a bicycle which I decided to buy, I did not have adequate money to purchase it and could not earn more money from my dad. Therefore, I decided to save my money by cutting down some of my unnecessary spendings. For instance, before starting to save, I ate an ice cream every day, but after my decision, I abandon it and saved its money instead. As a result, after a couple of months, I could buy my favorite bicycle with my own saving. Being financially responsible was a great experience for me and encourage me to save more money and have a plan for economic usage.
In conclusion, becoming financially responsible is a tremendous opportunity for young age children to practice how to spend their money and conquer economic predicaments. This responsibility also learn them how to save their money in order to supply their desires.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2142.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 463.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62634989201 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65368153063 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4686825054 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 679.5 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6189979123 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0476190476 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261747376183 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900138236992 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607033980851 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198063464423 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494032797842 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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