Dear Alice
I am so delighted since you wrote to me about your trip to Ahvaz. I have so much to tell you about my hometown.
First of all, it is necessary to know if you travel there in summer, you would surely be bothered by the weather. It is dying hot and humid at that time. While from end of autumn till the beginning of spring, it will turn very pleasant.
There are plenty of must-see attractions which I advice you not to lose. Firstly the Karoon river beach with it’s boat riding and eating facilities on a small island. Afternoon is the best time to enjoy the beauty of sunset on the beach and night is appropriate to experience the local life, since this city has a lively night life, especially the yummy street foods.
I extremely enjoyed if I could host you in the city, but unfortunately I do not live there anymore. I remember some hotels in that area but they seem to be slightly expensive. So I think the best choice is to reserve your room online.
Hope you a nice stay in Ahvaz
Love
Nancy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 50, Rule ID: ADVICE_ADVISE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'advise' (verb) instead of advice (noun)?
Suggestion: advise
... plenty of must-see attractions which I advice you not to lose. Firstly the Karoon riv...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, while, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43979057592 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34992813112 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664921465969 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4705384045 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.6666666667 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9166666667 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125452303726 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401118193759 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033862168263 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0630250512766 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319379541555 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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