Most of the people aspire to have a successful career and a happy family life.What problems are involved in combining a successful career and happy family life ?How to overcome such problems ?
In materialistic world, every individual wants to have high paying jobs and comfortable family lifestyle. But, few problems can be create a trouble to live both life style together. However it can be minimized by undertaking some fruitful steps in life.
There are various undeniable actions can always affects to either job sector or family life. First, if we want to succeed in career which needs to be spend high working hours at job place. And it can cause to less time for family. Second, in competitive era we always look forward more our job work rather than life partners, which also be a problem. In addition, happy family life style require have bunch of money and time that we spend during weekends and occasional days. For that, employees always require to work hard. Furthermore, whenever we come at our home and trying to utilize some precious time with kids and during these time our employer disturbed our life by calling or completing of goal. So we cannot keep fully concentration on our happy family.
On the other hand , some healthy steps are become in side of our better life. Likewise, we have to maintain better life balance in between the job and family. As, we do not try to work overtime in order to get too much money . Because, family is much important than money. And by doing this we have left sufficient time utilize with family members. Next, every weekends or occasional day we have visit our near by famous place or visit to a long trip can brings additional happy moments in sweet life without affecting job work. Lastly, we have to follow one basic rule that if we are at job place then we keep concentrate on work rather thinking about home. And same during stay at home.
In conclusion, it is certainly true that maintaining life balance is not as easy that we think. But, it can be stable if we follow some stricts rules in our life that does not affect job and family life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, lastly, likewise, look, second, so, then, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65395894428 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38670651944 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539589442815 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4532933768 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5714285714 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2380952381 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2380952381 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190938141049 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665398611861 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473339057561 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139083582471 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143510220389 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.