In some areas of the US, a "curfew" is imposed in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this.
Restriction on locomotion for youngsters at some time of the night if they are not in the custody of a grown-up has become imperative in some parts of the US. In my opinion, this is a fantastic development.
The upsurge in street robbery at night targeted especially at young adults has necessitated the legislature of laws to keep teenagers in-doors if they are not in the cynosure of adults. This is to shield them from eminent attacks and peradventure initiation into groups that carry out such naiferous activities. The authoritie envisage that such crimes will halt when perpetrators run out of victims. For instance the streets of New York has seen a plummet in adolescent centered street crimes since the introduction of the 9pm to 6am teenage sit at home order in the city.
Without doubt, some people will question the right of movement of young people with regards to this restriction of movement. Since there has been increasingly cases of manslaughter on the streets of major cities of the US after 9 pm , I believe if this new rule will safeguard the lives of young citizens of the state, then it is worthwhile. Without mincing words, the right to life far supersedes the right to movement. Moreover, the right to move about of the teenager is not denied, they can move around at anytime so far they have an adult with them at certain hours of the night. It is believed that the presence of a grown-up will go a long way in protecting them from dangers.
To conclude, the ban on movement of teenagers at certain hours of the night without an accompanying adult in some areas of the US will protect these youngsters from the increasing theft and killings witness in the streets at such time. In my opinion, this is a right step in the right direction. I believe this law should be extended to other areas to forestall such noctunal and callous attacks in the future.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 41.998997996 176% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71299093656 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71734160904 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507552870091 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3248292785 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.428571429 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6428571429 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269166772909 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873252379461 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070299221703 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178973205082 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463832495024 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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