You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
explain why you have moved
describe the new house
invite your friend to come and visit
Write at least 150 words.
Hi Friend,
I am writing this letter to invite you to my new three story house located near Margala hills, to which I have moved recently.
As you know, I was searching for the job which I got a month ago. The job is satisfactory, but it takes me about two hours daily to reach the office. Thus, I was facing many difficulties in managing the office schedule, family commitments, and workout routine. For this reason, I have shifted to a new place close to the workplace.
The house is big and airy. it has a big lawn and a garage on the front and the backside. Besides this, there is a swimming pool, that I like the most about the house. As I am a swimmer.
I would be delightful to have you here. We will have fun together. Please, do let me know if you can make it.
I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest.
Regards,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hi Friend, I am writing this letter to invite you t...
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Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'house' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'houses'.
Suggestion: houses
...ter to invite you to my new three story house located near Margala hills, to which I ...
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Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hills, to which I have moved recently. As you know, I was searching for the job...
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Line 7, column 28, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...orkplace. The house is big and airy. it has a big lawn and a garage on the fron...
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Line 7, column 168, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
..., that I like the most about the house. As I am a swimmer. I would be delightfu...
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Line 13, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng from you at the earliest. Regards,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, look, so, thus, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 687.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26708074534 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45074939587 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6334223741 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 52.8461538462 76.5299724578 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3846153846 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209261208996 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606610574413 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634410609174 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102077949291 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539386997397 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.9 8.37731958763 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.6 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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