Children should take part time job in their free time or they should totally focus on their studies . What are the advantages and disadvantages to children doing so ?
Cosmopolitan generation of contemporary era is more attentive as compared to past . Some proponent advocate that children should work part time after their school off . Despite , some opponents contended that they need to merely focused on their studies . Pros and con of given statement would be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs with my own perspective .
To begin with , learners become more active and expand their knowledge through their working experience . If children works along with the studies they earn money for tuition fee , accommodation fee . Pupils become financially strong . To illustrate , in United kingdom more than 26% school children engaged with part time job . Secondly , in advance they get experience of working environment , learn communication skills which is furthermore helps to theme get a high profile job along with high wages . In this way learners used their leisure hours in effective and innovative manners rather than waste it by doing unusual activities .
On the paradoxical side , pupils those start working at a young age they loose their concentration from studies . A study of United States showed that students who embarking job in their high school they did not want to higher University for professional degrees . School children allure towards finance and distract from high Studies . Despite from this , educator not become professionals they have less knowledge about subjects therefore they did not get higher working opportunities in adamant organisations.
To recapitulate , I contended that pupils should requires to be focused on their studies , they can do part time job side by side but without lost interest . By half day working children get financial strengthen or a sense of independent .
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- Children should take part time job in their free time or they should totally focus on their studies What are the advantages and disadvantages to children of doing so 81
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5092936803 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94016879292 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60594795539 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.377850057 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.625 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8125 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339203243489 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111469263842 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972741713242 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232165674622 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637732542626 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.