Nowadays, due to globalization, a significant portion of children is able to travel around the world through large and various exchange programs, while this trend is so beneficial it has some drawbacks too. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of education abroad and will give a logical conclusion.
The three main advantages of studying abroad are children will be experienced by new cultures and new methods of study and explore the world. Additionally, the third one is that getting an education in another country is aimed to encourage a person’s independence and problem-solving skills without parents. Firstly, owning a challengeable tour youth’s mindset might be broadening and therefore provide the enhance in developing critical thinking. Secondly, there are a lot of free programs that cover all the fees to encourage you to get into another country absolutely for free.
However, there are some disadvantages like it is difficult for youngsters to cope with the new society and parents as well can find it worriedly to know that their children are so far from them. Foreign students struggle to cooperate in a new area, thus it can deteriorate their eagerness to study and affect the personality as they might be feeling as dark horses among the others. Moreover, they could not be included in the friendship zone as for local students it also can be considered as some type of challenge. Additionally, it is exhausting for parents to always think about their children's safeness, as for them they are like worthier than diamonds and gold.
To conclude, of course, some parents may still worry but it more beneficial for their children to send them abroad, that is why parents overcoming their tensions. Therefore, the advantages of study in a separated country overweigh the disadvantages of it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 413, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ght be broadening and therefore provide the enhance in developing critical thinking. Second...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, third, thus, well, while, as for, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21212121212 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04486214465 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2062580185 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301823242047 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103611956101 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864494021331 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187740383657 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846627687583 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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