Government should offer collage and university education free of charge to all students
Now a days if one wants to get education, need to pay fees to university or college for any particular course. The author recommends that government should offer collages and university education free of charge to all students. there is deficiency in the argument that need to be addressed before author's proposal can be seriously considered. I strongly disagree with authors recommendation for two reasons.
If government offer free education for all students, we would face problem of lack of quality education. Because of free education, collages would face problem of money, so they may not give enough resources to students so indirectly it would lead lack in quality education. For instance, college has problem of money and they are not able to buy computers to teach them practical, so student will not get much practical knowledge of computers, and in future they will not become a skilled employee. so the idea of offering free education is not good for student's education quality.
Further more, The quality of teachers would also get decreased, so it again leads to lack in quality education. If collage suffers from problem of money, they may not able to pay teachers their good salary. It will result good knowledgeable teachers prefer industry jobs rather than teaching in collages. hence the quality of education will deteriorate. Furthermore, nations growth will deteriorate as today's students are going to contribute in growth of nation.
To sum up, the author's recommendation that governments should offer free education is not reasonable, it would lead lack in quality education, as well as lack in quality teachers. for these reasons I strongly disagree the author's recommendation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Now a days if one wants to get education, need to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, well, as to, for instance, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 274.0 442.535393258 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2700729927 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93515984253 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510948905109 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 704.065955056 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.0285835146 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2666666667 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 5.21951772744 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315504209444 0.243740707755 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121687500679 0.0831039109588 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.183298319892 0.0758088955206 242% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189689477182 0.150359130593 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859226288058 0.0667264976115 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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