Some people think that the best place to raise children is in a city. Others think that the best place is in the countryside. Compare these two views. Which view do you agree with? Explain why.
People often start thinking whether to live in cities or in countryside after birth of a children or planning to give birth to a child. Most of them think living in countryside would allow them to be healthier, fit and they can enjoy the enigmatic view of sunrise and sunset. There are several advantages living in countryside. First, a person can observe nature very closely. Observing closely in a sense that countryside possess beautiful fields with water running down from the hills with trees on both sides of this running water can help the children’s feel less stressed and much fresh. Second, the food we eat there is much more hygienic than in cities. A person can raise their own poultry, can plant variety of fruits and vegetables for consumption rather than buying it in the stores expensively. Children can enjoy playing in vast field and grounds where they feel less stressed and much closer to nature. In addition to this, there are several benefits of raising children in cities. A city is a place full of opportunities and resources. The most important part of a child upbringing is their education in prestigious institutions which in my view can’t be obtained in countryside. A child can have various positive experiences in cities, can met variety of people which would allow them to be stronger and motivated for future endeavours. Furthermore, living in a city could help the children to be independent and can take their own decisions wisely. Nowadays, child nutrition is a massive problem and the children’s who suffered more are from countryside. These kind of problems can be vanished living in cities. Moreover, living in cities would provide massive career opportunities for these children’s to achieve their dreams and have a positive impact on the society. Discussing all these points I guess living in cities is better than living in countryside.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
...cities or in countryside after birth of a children or planning to give birth to a child. M...
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Line 1, column 1588, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
...who suffered more are from countryside. These kind of problems can be vanished living in c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, i guess, in addition, kind of, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07348242812 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90571874428 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520766773163 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1517464919 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4117647059 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4117647059 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129858938085 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464629055184 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027043635884 0.0737576698707 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129858938085 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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