The amount of time spend on sport and exercise should be increased in school in order to tackle the problem of overweight children? Do you think this the best way to deal with the problem? What other solutions can you suggest?
As the axiom goes as you saw so you reap, children are tomorrows’ talents and technocrats who will lead the coming generation, so building a health generation is the urgent need of this hour. Nowadays it’s quite natural to see some obese children in each and every classroom as they are lacking proper exercises. I stand with the people who argue that educational institutions have to allocate some extra hours for the promotion of competitive sports to eliminate the issue. Moreover, I believe following a proper diet will help to control this issue up to a great extent.
The first and foremost action to be implemented to face the issue of fatty children in the society is following regular extracurricular activities which promote both mental and physical fitness of the individuals. In other words, it is quite convenient to the edu-experts to make sure the students are fit in all means by conducting sports and games which allow them to get rid of fat and unwanted substances from the body. Thus, schools can build a strong society for tomorrow.
Secondly, additionally, it is the duty of both teachers and parents to aware to follow a healthy diet which will lead to strong body and mind. To put it in another way, in order to get rid of obese children from the society the toddlers have to tune from the regular consumption of junk food which contribute more fat to the body to some healthy diet such as traditional cuisine of each community those are believed to be free from unhealthy elements. So it is the fact that unbalanced intake is the major cause of the issue.
To conclude, by analyzing the different factors of building the strongest community by controlling the plumpness, I would say that not only extracurricular activities address the issue well but also limiting the amount of preprocessed food eaten from restaurants bring the best results
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, such as, in other words, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93103448276 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85873480029 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557993730408 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.2737303283 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.0 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118783904206 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395479044225 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0293556382002 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0631965621709 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269117613722 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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