Today, the interaction between teenagers or young generation is heavily influenced by cigarette, liquor and drugs and even legal offense. This essay will discuss roots of these issues and give possible remedy which we could take to lessen the problem.
No one can deny that recent generation is more attracted with brand new developments such as information technology, wireless network or some gadgets dedicated to lessen the human labor and development of things that encourage people to have a bad habits are not an exception. There are a widespread of causes that affected to increasing number of unhealthy activities. To illustrate, people are more likely to follow someone's instruction or lifestyle, so, activity through social media is the biggest effect. All people have their rights to navigate any web site they like or strike up an relationship any person they are interested in as nowadays public medias are becoming more opened. In other words, people acquire ideas to do something legal is mostly rooted from person they follow and admire on the internet. For example, more and more girls and boys becoming interested in pistols, bank robbing, drugs, lean (liquor that is influential for human nerve) because of the trap rappers they admire. It is the most pathetic phenomenon in recent society.
It is good to know there are more people to prevent youths from these social addictions than people who occur these problems. Regardless of the their age of social status the steady and strengthen policies and legislation should be regulated to shorten the frequency of these occurences. Furthermore, attention from adults or parents to their child is needed more than even before as these bad habits can exacerbate people physical and mental health.
In conclusion, society itself becoming powerless because of the new interests of its people. To lessen the anxiety of this situation, people, senior adults and government should be more conscious about what they are doing for their society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'habit'?
Suggestion: habit
...ngs that encourage people to have a bad habits are not an exception. There are a wides...
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Line 3, column 556, Rule ID: WEB_SITE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'website'?
Suggestion: website
...eople have their rights to navigate any web site they like or strike up an relationship ...
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Line 3, column 588, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ate any web site they like or strike up an relationship any person they are intere...
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Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
...who occur these problems. Regardless of the their age of social status the steady and str...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, then, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22600619195 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66003554305 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600619195046 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7292231523 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.571428571 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217668155646 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627787081576 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042320202337 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113971839592 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180406551284 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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