Demand for food is increasing worldwide? What is the cause of this? What measures can the international community take to make sure the supply of food is enough?
Nowadays, due to rapid increase into population as the demand of food becomes escalating day by day over the world. However, there are uncountable reasons like shortages in land for husbandry, less fertile lands and transports are not enough to export food items along with solutions for example, providing good seeds and pesticides to the farmers, upgrade the transportation system and educate farmers about farming to tackle these obstacles.
The are multifarious factors of this perception that why the supply of food items becoming falling day by day over the globe and first is that fertility among lands are reducing dramatically because a majority of farmers using a vast amount of pesticides and fertiliser which can perilous for land’s fertility and decrease it. In addition to this, farmers finds lack in transport systems which are use to sending food things around the world so that is why they neglect to grow more crops in their fields. Even though, shortage of lands is also another main concern area due to these food production dropped steadily the reason is that a huge amount lands are destroyed and use for set up new buildings, complex and etcetera to the development of cities. For example, in Delhi only few villages farms are remaining which doing farming while others expand for build up apartments, industries, factories, hospitals and so on.
Nevertheless, there are several solutions to solve this hurdles and the main one is that it is crucial for authorities to enhance conditions of transport services and use airlines for export a vast measure of food items worldwide. Furthermore, if regime will organise campaigns which educates husbandry owners about farming related information and motivates them for counting their works about to agriculture than demand of food will be definitely full filled in whole world. Apart from this, it is mandatory for governments to offer best quality seeds and fertilisers to farmers on very reasonable prices as well as arrange farmer fairs where regime can give knowledge related to pesticides and fertiliser how to use it in which quantity and etcetera. For instance, in Punjab every year farmer fair is holding in Ronn near Patiala city where farmers can gain knowledge about agriculture and purchase seeds and fertiliser on cheap rates.
In conclusion, although rise in populace are responsible for growing demand of foods as well as farmers less interested to do farming but if international communities take some necessary steps than they can easily solve these complications.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ut farming to tackle these obstacles. The are multifarious factors of this perception...
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Suggestion: used
...nds lack in transport systems which are use to sending food things around the world...
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Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'these foods'?
Suggestion: this food; these foods
...s also another main concern area due to these food production dropped steadily the reason ...
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Suggestion: offer the best
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...knowledge about agriculture and purchase seeds and fertiliser on cheap rates. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2155.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 412.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23058252427 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7810323306 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565533980583 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 681.3 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.3395676212 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 195.909090909 106.682146367 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.4545454545 20.7667163134 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8181818182 7.06120827912 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224241847703 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915362128265 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443389491843 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150395839314 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246278408243 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.9 13.0946893788 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.46 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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