Nowadays, we can see definite sign of surplus production in almost every industry sector and thus is leading to environmental damage. What are the some possible solution to this situation
In this day, it is noticed that the most of industries are manufacturing their product more than consumer need therefore, that result into environmental problems. This essay, primarily, evaluates the detrimental effect of surplus production of goods and secondarily, suggest some remedial measure to alleviate the problems.
On the one hand, industries today using more resources such as fossil fuel to fulfill the demand of consumer. However, in modern days of competition, every company want to sale more product of their field than their competitors. Due to this they initiated making more product then the requirement. Consequently, for making more product they use more resources, and this result into the pollution and global warming. To exemplify, a recent research revealed that in Brazil, the excessive production of palm oil is the cause of deforestation and environmental change in their country .
On the other hand, if the industries use alternate methods of energy such as electricity or hydro energy then the pollution caused by coal of fossil fuel can be reduced to some extent. To illustrate, a recent report shown by BCC news channel that in China, they implement a law in which, if industry manufacture more goods than requirement then they have to face plenty or jail. Hence, this may be a good example for other Nation if they follow same rules.
In conclusion, it can be reiterated that the production of goods more than need is deleterious for both environment and that factory. Thus, if the factory made proper planning before manufacturing of products and uses of eco-friendly methods then this situation can be cured to few extend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, however, if, may, second, so, then, therefore, thus, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2156133829 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9341305501 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553903345725 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6748374988 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.916666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172330167011 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697528489912 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357464243447 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116498532402 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035945279115 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.