the pie charts below give information about household expenditure of an average US family in different years.
The two given pie charts illustrate the data of average household expense in an US family in 1970 and 2004.
As can be seen from the former graph, in 1970, the percentage of family expenditure in mortgage cam top of the list at 26% while the one in childcare was on the other end of the scale. food and clothing, with the propotion was about 2% lower, held the second position, compared with the figure for trasnport and entertainment which only accounted 13% each in the household outlay.
Until 2004, there were several trends witnessed in the average domestic outflow. childcare and mortgage observed a significant increase by 9% and 24% respectively. An opposite tendency was evident in the data of the rest factors. A sharp decrease of a half was seen in the propotion of food spending (12%) and clothing (10%), compared with a 8% drop in transport. The percentage of household cost in entertainment satyed unchanged during the same period of time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Food
...care was on the other end of the scale. food and clothing, with the propotion was ab...
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Suggestion: Childcare
...nessed in the average domestic outflow. childcare and mortgage observed a significant inc...
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Suggestion: an
...ing 12% and clothing 10%, compared with a 8% drop in transport. The percentage of...
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Suggestion: period
...inment satyed unchanged during the same period of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 802.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89024390244 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76310354954 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621951219512 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3264202756 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.25 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188354700117 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744232160847 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101405785327 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160453139382 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124561592856 0.0819641961636 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.