Television is a very powerful medium of influence over large populations .there are many positive aspects to television. For example, it is educational tool. However many people feel that it is doing irreparable harm.
Present argumentation to highlight your opinion on this matter.
Tremendous number of people in all over the world are influenced by the popularity of television. Having an educational purpose or simply just for fun, people are attracted by this socializing mean. However others believe that it has some irreversible damages on health.
It is a controversial issue these days that whether people should watch television or not.
In my perspective people obviously require to watch tv if they willing to be an up-to-date person. Therefore sitting on front of tv would be an inevitable matter for people. However the most strongest issue that should be concerned is, to what extent people should use it.
First of foremost its better to categorize the spectacular into some groups. Including: children,young adults and elder people.
As far as scientists declare, there is a distinct relationship between the hours that children watch tv and the level of concentration in them. Whereas at the age of 0-7 brain is progressing itself with the fastest speed and some connections between different parts of the two hemispheres are occurring, watching tv is highly warned.
The second group is the young-adults who are mature enough to be safe. They can benefit to promoting their knowledge, social skills, well-being, latest economical and political news.
Seniors and disordered people are another group which take advantages by watching tv and being informed how to deter the state of being vulnerable by learning about self-care and eradicating hopelessness and loneliness.
In conclusion, thee question of watching tv or not it is completely dependant on the age and social state of people, considering be aware of not being over-use to avoid some physical problems like eye-irritation and mental disorders like getting impatient.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Tremendous number of people in all over the world are influenced by the...
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...are attracted by this socializing mean. However others believe that it has some irrever...
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...my perspective people obviously require to watch tv if they willing to be an up-to-date ...
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...hey willing to be an up-to-date person. Therefore sitting on front of tv would be an inev...
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...e connections between different parts of the two hemispheres are occurring, watc...
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...essness and loneliness. In conclusion, thee question of watching tv or not it ...
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...ness. In conclusion, thee question of watching tv or not it is completely depe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, whereas, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37142857143 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0271538967 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632142857143 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2040853854 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.266666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0802246371165 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0309794479907 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392771509097 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0381248234427 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493499623489 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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