Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since the beginning of time, human beings have always strived to improve their living standards and bring more convenience to their day-to-day life.
Throughout history, human beings copied their ancestor’s behavior. what are we now is a reflection of our father's behaviors. In all societies and all generation human beings are looking for a qualified hero to repeat their actions. there are so many heroes to follow but in modern society people, tendencies are a bit different from the past. we are all searching for a successful person who can answer all our modern needs. I agree with the above sentences and I will explicate my point of view in 2 outstanding reasons.
First and foremost without any shadow of a doubt the young are more influential than old. humans brain is like a white paper from beginning life and with living, the paper will full with their experiences from living. This paper is much empty for youngsters than the elderly so there is more space for them to fill with what they want. The youngsters always looking for someone or something to help them to fill the paper and when they find a hero they never let him/her go. they want to fill their paper as soon as possible. As a personal experience when I was younger I obsessed with basketball and I copied every single move than my favorite player did.
The second reason I would like to bring here is when we age we have lots of things to do and usually the old people don’t have enough time to following celebrities news or seeing their interviews. they going to work and when they came back to their house they prefer spending time with their family or rest. And the elders are less influential than youngsters because their paper is almost filled and they are precise about what is going to fill it completely.
To wrap it up and make a long story short, we all have a tendency to fallow a successful person because we all want to become a success but the youngsters are more hopeful and active and their brain and imagination work in the way very different from elders. they pay more attention to press or news and they need a hero more than anything in their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'celebrities'' or 'celebrity's'?
Suggestion: celebrities'; celebrity's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65714285714 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47312285388 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503896103896 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9965985214 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6111111111 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3888888889 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.77777777778 5.45110844103 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138330812648 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483801385712 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350664987893 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0753098668374 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355947109979 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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