Crime appear to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. Identify the possible causes of this trend, and propose some solutions you think would be effective.
Many countries have recently confronted with ever-rising rate of crime, committed especially the young, and raising concern among the government and individuals alike. Given the seriousness of the issue in focus, effective solutions should be considered in order to lessen the severity of the situation as we will discuss in the following paragraphs.
Perhaps the major factor here is youth unemployment. Jobless can lead to poverty due to the fact that people who don’t have a job find it hard to meet their basic needs therefore such people can easily resort to crime to fulfill their needs. Moreover, given the economic recession in some countries, statistics show the number of people living below the poverty line is on the rise. Examples can be seen in less affluent countries where the possibility of resorting to crime is high. Another cause can be that people don’t have enough aware of the consequence of crime that if the know, maybe never do.
Turning to possible solutions, to alleviate the problem, the state consider the possibility of developing policy according to which can create job opportunity. If this step be taken by the government, people`s income would be increased as such they have no longer reason to have recourse to crime. A second remedy might be run a campaign in an attempt to promote the awareness of a direct result of committing crime. If people were more aware of ending result, they would less do it. Finally, the state should introduce severe punishment for committing crime. That being the case, people may less tend to do such activities, so the crime rate will decrease significantly.
In summary, the factors of unemployment and poverty seem to be the main causes. A coordinated response by the state may rectify the situation.
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- It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.Discuss both these views 84
- It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.Discuss both these views 84
- Crime appear to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. Identify the possible causes of this trend, and propose some solutions you think would be effective. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...are of the consequence of crime that if the know, maybe never do. Turning to possible...
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Suggestion:
... the state may rectify the situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09830508475 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8136083312 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593220338983 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8382886933 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.266666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.06666666667 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232812910485 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740195899732 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543799566362 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131396373807 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475243894732 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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