The plans below show a student room for two students and a student room for one student at an Australian university.
The two maps compare prices and features of two student rooms: one for two people and the other for one person at an Australian university.
Sharing a similar layout to the single room, the room for two people is still slightly more spacious and equipped with more furniture even though it costs less per person.
At 200 dollars per week, the single room is 6 meters in length and 2.5 meters in breadth. To the top left corner situated the bathroom, which is opposite the kitchen areas with a range of appliances such as a sink, a stove and a microwave. The only study desk in the room is between the bathroom and the bed, which has a window view. There is also a television across the room, from the study desk.
Being 1.5 m wider, the room for two people charges 350 dollars weekly. It is notable that the interior is similar to that of a single for the most part, with several deviations. Not only is there a bookshelf added next to bathroom but the kitchen area is also rearranged along the width of the room, giving space for a table and chairs and the television. The extra space at the bottom is occupied by the study and sleeping area for the second student, separated from that for the first one by two cupboards.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, so, still, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1015.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49115044248 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28322014106 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530973451327 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4816413033 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389367072912 0.215688989381 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139402018319 0.103423049105 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125754505265 0.0843802449381 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242100933854 0.15604864568 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140085221855 0.0819641961636 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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