Modern lifestyle mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Parents play a vital role in children's life. It is a undeniable fact whether nowadays, parents do not have enough time for their children as compared to earlier time. I concur with this statement as well as this easy intends to know what are reasons behind it and my personal views this matter.
To embark with, the evidences are plenty to prove why children do not procure as much attention from their parents as children did in ever before. The mammoth recognisable fact is that due to hectic life. Earning much more money in the life is widely common in the contemporary era. In order to spend a luxury life, people have to work for late hours. Thereby, they are not able to devote time to their family.
In addition, in the earlier time, people was earn money to complete their basic needs instead of to become rich person. At that time, they had enough time for their family. To illustrate, in the past, only one parent worked and mothers were there supervise their children, and people worked limited hours nor longer time.
However, there are some remedy which could be able to curtail such situations. Firstly, parents should be conscious pertaining to their children. If parents devote time to their family, children could be gain much more attention from their parents. Owing to the lack of attention, children could proceed towards bad companies which are dangerous for their future. To enhance co - ordinate with children, parents should spend more time with them. Thus, such keys which more likely to prove beneficial to figure out these situations.
To sum up, without parents, children can not be grow in the future. Albeit parents do not have enough time on account of some reasons, to ensure parents must attention to their kids during the work. Parents have to be manage balance in their personal life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, thus, well, in addition, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8785942492 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31080528995 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543130990415 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3372849819 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.35 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.65 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432615597724 0.244688304435 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14180893935 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115365827236 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265451305997 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277119994596 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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