Modern world has no real picture from Austen' time.Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they respond to the specific arguments made in the reading passage.
In this set of materials, the writer and lecturer are discussing the reality of Jane Austen 's portrait. They are largely discordant with each other while the writer claims some experts have good reasons to believe. They poses several reasons about debate. The lecturer invalidates the writer's assertions in all aspects and demonstrates that it is not real Austen's seen. The detail of the professor's refutations are revealed in the following paragraphs.
People know Jane Austen from Hollywood movies or a portrait which does not resemble properly. In the Austen times, people have no any technological devices, so it is found ony paintings. Lecturer says first portrait was publicated in 1882 but it is an illustrate Austen's whom dead before 70 years ago.
Portrait has some drawbacks that is related with Cassandra's sketch. It has some similarity with her cousins, some teenager girls. This has no objective painting. İt looks like painter thinks about Austen.
Austen portrait has no real dated that is not exact. There is an debate among the people. But lecturer attributes a stamp which is find the picture. İt is dated nearly time. According to it, painter is 27 years old when the portrait has finished. There is not coherent between the painter old and Austen. Moreover, painter does not live in London that is real evidence.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 221, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'pose'
Suggestion: pose
...erts have good reasons to believe. They poses several reasons about debate. The lectu...
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Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...perly. In the Austen times, people have no any technological devices, so it is fou...
^^
Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...rtrait was publicated in 1882 but it is an illustrate Austens whom dead before 70 years ago. ...
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Line 13, column 63, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... real dated that is not exact. There is an debate among the people. But lecturer a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, look, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 22.412803532 62% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 30.3222958057 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1129.0 1373.03311258 82% => OK
No of words: 221.0 270.72406181 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10859728507 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60163288794 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 145.348785872 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592760180995 0.540411800872 110% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 419.366225166 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 21.2450331126 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8282225861 49.2860985944 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.4210526316 110.228320801 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.6315789474 21.698381199 54% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.94736842105 7.06452816374 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.27373068433 304% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113347072962 0.272083759551 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372011291217 0.0996497079465 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349517849668 0.0662205650399 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.066761954397 0.162205337803 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190782258054 0.0443174109184 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.3589403974 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 53.8541721854 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.0289183223 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.17 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.498013245 61% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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