Modern societies need specialists in certain fields but not others Some people therefore think that governments should pay university fees for students who study subjects that are needed by society Those who choose to study less relevant subjects should n

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Modern societies need specialists in certain fields, but not others. Some people therefore think that governments should pay university fees for students who study subjects that are needed by society. Those who choose to study less relevant subjects should not receive government funding.

Would the advantages of such an educational policy outweigh the disadvantages?

Todays, it is obvouse that modern societies need to be developed all aspects of science to use them for keeping the people who are living in these societes up to date so that they need specialists in all the fields. It seems clearly when the government focuse on certain fields and support them lead to increasing the number of applications and also raising compettions among students that some one not only does not like these fields but they also can not really continue their education in this fields.

More over, little by little the students who are graduated can not find decent job opportuni...

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Sentence: It seems clearly when the government focuse on certain fields and support them lead to increasing the number of applications and also raising compettions among students that some one not only does not like these fields but they also can not really continue their education in this fields.
Description: A numeral, cardinal is not usually followed by a negator
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Sentence: Todays, it is obvouse that modern societies need to be developed all aspects of science to use them for keeping the people who are living in these societes up to date so that they need specialists in all the fields.
Error: obvouse Suggestion: obvious
Error: societes Suggestion: societies

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