in some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
Nowadays, one of the biggest worrying in communities is a health where the food is becoming the main reason of it. While that, the law from the government that is incriminating of society about the high tax of food which is imposed.
In some countries experience an increase amount of people are suffering as well as it is caused by the most of fast food which is eaten of people. For example, one of district in Indonesia have many grievances about the people who are suffer famine where this place is experiencing el nino then nothing subsidizing from government in order they are prefer to consume the junk food. As result, many people at that place ill caused the significant kinds of diseases. As result, the major problem of this happen are about the healthy food, despite there is not carrying from government about it.
On the other side, the law that is applied in government where presents them biggest tax on kids of food that is to being difficult matter from society and causing several problems of it. The first, when the people more choice to consume the healthy food should be think about the price therefore encourage them to prefer chose junk food that is cheaper than healthy food. Secondly, the kinds of diseases from food will experienced by society such as famine, diarrhea and others. Finally, this matter will be influencers as the communities welfare however give the negative effect of this country which is reducing their capacities.
To sum up, the country which do not give pay attention to their society will decreasing on every things such as welfare, capacities, confidences from communities and many negative effects more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...a have many grievances about the people who are suffer famine where this place is exper...
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Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'suffered'.
Suggestion: suffered
...any grievances about the people who are suffer famine where this place is experiencing...
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Line 3, column 350, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'preferred'.
Suggestion: preferred
...izing from government in order they are prefer to consume the junk food. As result, ma...
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Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'them the biggest'.
Suggestion: them the biggest
...is applied in government where presents them biggest tax on kids of food that is to being di...
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Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'thought'?
Suggestion: thought
...e to consume the healthy food should be think about the price therefore encourage the...
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Line 5, column 329, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to junk'
Suggestion: to junk
...herefore encourage them to prefer chose junk food that is cheaper than healthy food....
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Line 5, column 421, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'experience'
Suggestion: experience
...y, the kinds of diseases from food will experienced by society such as famine, diarrhea and...
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Line 7, column 78, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'decrease'
Suggestion: decrease
...ive pay attention to their society will decreasing on every things such as welfare, capaci...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90425531915 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54993142932 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521276595745 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.6079452917 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.727272727 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6363636364 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2727272727 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35713854224 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138524106436 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621424744994 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198470942955 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110581403025 0.056905535591 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.