Of late, it is believed that students studying in secondary and high school should be taught how to manage money it is important life skill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays,money is an important aspect of our life. Moreover, some people believes that student should learn about money management in early age group.So on, its important skill for person to live a life in a better way. According to me it comes with positive and negative aspects.
To begin with, there are tremendous number of advantage whys it is necessary of a person to learn. Firstly, learn it in school help them understand the value of money and might be able pupils to cut down their expenses to save an amount of money for their future. Secondly, they can also develop maturity and tolerance and motivate them to plan for their future o cut down the burden from their parents shoulder.
On the other hand, learn money management may also have some draw back for pupils. Firstly, it would stupid thing for us to ignore the fact that students in high school are immature and adolescence.so, its hard for them to understand about money management.Secondly, if we can add new subject in their school will increase in burden for them and decline the study performance of pupils.
To end up, I hearty believe that it is important for a child to learn about money management but if it is necessary to learn in a school will decline their performance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74885844749 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75258019567 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566210045662 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.306729181 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.555555556 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1111111111 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188272635945 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833011691452 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705630487972 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13073754464 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599351813689 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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