More and more people want own popular branded clothes , cars and other items .what is the reason behind this . its a negative or positive change .
In this era of globalisation and modernization , masses give preference to purchase branded dresses , automobiles and anyother products .change is the law of nature and every change brings with some pros and cons .I utterly believe its a negative change and development . Reasons behind this change would be discussed in the subsequent sections of the essay .
To commence with , individual give preference to purchase eminent clothes ,footwear and vehicle and other things . people expenditure on these because of availability of online shopping , humans purchase product from any country via phone and laptop . To exemplify , my college bought Nike shoes from London through online shopping . They face huge financial burden on them .people branded things only to outshine others .
On the other hand , humans go far from their tradition . They forget their values . people feel equality in society and it enhance their confidence after wear branded clothes . To illustrate , a statics recently conducted indicate that , 80 ℅ people from nations go to other countries . Most of Indians go to foreign countries and give preference to wear western clothes . They feel comfortable and it helps to familiar with cosmopolitan culture .
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that people forget their tradition and culture through buying popular clothes and their tradition values reduced .people needs to avoide that
- Children should take part time job in their free time or they should totally focus on their studies What are the advantages and disadvantages to children of doing so 81
- Government should educate children about their health right from school by introducing subject like health . Do you agree with this ? 73
- While recruiting a new new employee ,the employer should pay attention to their personal qualities rather than qualifications and experience. To what extent do you agree and disagree .Give your opinion and include relevant examples. 84
- Some people say that in past knowledge was store in the box but now people store knowledge on the internet.Is it a positive and negative change. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 56
- Nowadays most people rely on readymade food due to their excessive busy routine band find it an esay way to satisfy their health on one way or the other . To what extent do you agree or disagree . 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1193.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57476635514 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82759083404 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607476635514 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.7177583694 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7692307692 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4615384615 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92307692308 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211088713653 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672900412706 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054047738233 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122520092913 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497232171827 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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