Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country's police force or military force, such as army, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. What is your opinion?
It is often thought that women ought to join the defence and police services of their nation in order to attain equality with the opposite gender, however, some opine that women are not the right candidates for these kinds of services. In my opinion, I believe that equal opportunities should be provided to all, as, it would aid to remove gender differences in society.
The first and foremost benefit of equal participation of females in the armed forces, police and intelligent services would bring down the gender disparity ratio. In other words, both the sexes would be treated equally in terms of their capacities to perform any task or work, and this is the fundamental rule of humanity. Therefore, it is the prime right of ladies to choose their profession in any stream as per their interest. Moreover, this would widen the spectrum of job availabilities for them, and they could earn and serve their countries by joining such kind of honourable services.
There is a misconception that military jobs require a lot of stamina and a strong physique which the women lack, however, it is proved wrong by various ladies and Kiran Bedi, the first and famous Indian Police Servent in India is one of the best example. To illustrate it with another example, in India, there are women units in all defence forces such as army, navy and airforce, and in police departments as well. It is evident that proper physical training and practice strengthens women's physical and mental powers in order to perform their duties effectively and in a disciplined manner.
In conclusion, I agree that providing a level playing field for all in the armed or police forces irrespective of sex would diminish the figures gender partiality, and also helps to develop a genuine platform at the national level for both males and females to feel proud by serving their countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9619047619 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64727644238 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565079365079 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.1587927221 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.3 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222261009176 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821912883436 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554438998914 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130452828452 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583247831838 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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