Parents should be held legally responsible for their children's acts. What is your opinion? support it with personal examples.
The importance of parents responsible for their children’s acts which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion. This essay will further elaborate my reason for the positive effects of this trend and this will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reason which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that parents are purely responsible to their children bad behavior as well as parents are first tutor and guidance of their children life only they can provide good manners to them. Another pivotal aspect for the argument is that parents know their children strength and weaknesses therefore only parents can give good sense and brilliant way to their child which is very useful in their future and useful in any situation with good think they easily face any circumstances in whole life as well as easily survives in any trouble. Needless to say all these merits stand of parents responsible for their children’s acts.
Elaborating my view point, this trend has some merits but one of the crucial effects is that parents should become more responsible for their children acts and necessary put some rigid steps to control their children bad habits. As an illustration, parents should provide good knowledge and help them in their worst time and give them good skills and ideas. Besides, some children want to become like their father therefore if his father be a good person then his child also be a good person. It is apparently why many are in favor of parents responsible for their children’s acts.
According to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach a conclusion that the benefits of parents responsible for their children’s acts are indeed too great.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, but, first, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 20.9802955665 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 302.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11920529801 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7477219434 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.5024630542 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.7528851461 50.4703680194 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.6 104.977214359 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2 20.9669160288 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 7.25397266985 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318387371533 0.242375264174 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157718415597 0.0925447433944 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068502925286 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200693932127 0.151781067708 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647930241265 0.0609392437508 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 12.6369458128 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.94827586207 196% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.3980295567 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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