You are going on a short holiday soon and would like to invite a friend to join you. Write a letter to him/her and say
– Explain why you need a holiday.
– Explain why you want your friend to come.
– Where and when do you want to go?
Dear Mike,
I am writing to inform you that I will not be able to start in my new role at your company on upcoming Monday as it was agreed earlier. Hopefully you remember that during interview I mentioned about my plans of visiting parents in my home country. Currently I am in Russia and I planned to stay here till tomorrow. I am very sorry to message that, but an hour ago the airlines which I supposed to return back sent me a notification about 3 days delay of my flight. I checked the possibility of exchanging tickets, but no suitable options has been found. I am very sorry that our cooperation starts with so unpleasant news, but I hope the fact that I am starting on Thursday instead of Monday does not affect our relationships.
Sincerely yours,
Maxim Grechikhin.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mike, I am writing to inform you that I will n...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 398, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...ur ago the airlines which I supposed to return back sent me a notification about 3 days del...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 555, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...but no suitable options has been found. I am very sorry that our cooperation star...
^
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur relationships. Sincerely yours, Maxim Grechikhin.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, i suppose
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 650.0 937.175257732 69% => OK
No of words: 141.0 206.0 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60992907801 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75630247977 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.709219858156 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 201.6 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.0983863545 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8571428571 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0685673790644 0.216113520407 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0283254194012 0.0766984524023 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451979746261 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0699907060225 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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