It is commonly known that the majority of people nowadays tend to buy unnecessary things that they actually cannot afford due to the fact that they believe having branded bag lead to upgrade their social status. Although this becomes a negative behavior, educate them about the minimalism lifestyle should be helpful.
Improving social-statuses is the main reason people are doing a consumptive lifestyle. People are likely to be judged based on how wealthy they are, especially in the capital city, and as a consequence of this, hedonism lifestyle, many people are ended up with a serious problem of debts. According to Financial.com, shows that 70% of people with credit card debt cannot pay it off every year, and the top expense that is added to people's balance.
More importantly, to tackle this problem people should change their behavior and follow a minimalism lifestyle. What is a minimalism lifestyle? Minimalism is all about living with less, and this includes less financial burdens such as debt and unnecessary expenses. As a result, this simple life leads to less stress, fewer things, and more goals. Research conducted by Harvard shows that people who follow a minimalism lifestyle enjoy more financial independence because they spend on things that they really need and earn not to buy things to conform to the ideas of the popular culture, and this helps them to save more.
In conclusion, some people are in debt for following a trend to improve their social status. However, this can be overcome by adopting a minimalism lifestyle. It is recommended to find out things are really needed, so the expenditure can be measured.
- The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. 78
- The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. 89
- In some areas of the US a curfew is imposed in which teenagers are not allowed to be outdoors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.What is your opinion about this? 73
- The line graph shows three different crimes in England and Wales in 1970-2005. 61
- The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 432, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
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Line 5, column 420, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hows that people who follow a minimalism lifestyle enjoy more financial independe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, really, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09963099631 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73973747072 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568265682657 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.5220275531 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.307692308 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3405323254 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117275093124 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373036737981 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203281218722 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233082193417 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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