A friend is staying in your flat in your absence.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
* Tell him where he/she can find the key.
* Ask him to look after something important.
*Instruct him on what to do on your day of return.
Dear Babu,
Thank you for accepting my invitation to stay at my flat in October. I am grateful that you have managed an entire month for me and surprised that your family is so supportive. Having you at my home during my training abroad will make me feel so much relieved.
However, you need to know some way around my apartment as you are going to stay there for a while. When you arrive, if I am not there, please look for the key under the mattress. I have left detailed instructions on the refrigerator, which will come in handy if you cannot find anything once you are inside the house.
As you know, the primary reason I requested you to stay at the apartment in my stead is to feed my cat. She responds by the name Mittens and you like her very much as far as I can remember. I have also left notes about how to feed her on the fridge. You will find her food on the top shelf in the kitchen.
You will see that a cleaner will come every day in the morning to clean up the floors and furniture. Please remind him to clean the bathrooms on my day of return, which will be on 1st November.
Hope you find your stay enjoyable!
Your friend,
Shadip
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 25, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d your stay enjoyable! Your friend, Shadip
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30941704036 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27874181078 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569506726457 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.6313929224 44.8134815571 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.9230769231 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1538461538 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130694018002 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060083838553 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0951283133155 0.0603063233224 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882128037902 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753287168848 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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