You have had a bank account for a few years. Recently you received a letter from the bank stating that your account is $240 overdrawn and that you will be charged $70 which will be taken directly from your account. You know that this information is incorrect.
Write a letter to the bank. Explain what has happened and say what you would like them to do about it.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to complaining you about that I received a letter from your bank and tell me that my account is overdrawn $240 and that charged $70. that information is incorrect.
I am shaimoon Hossain. I am a savings account holder at your bank. I have a loan when i brought my new car. So, every month I have to $500 for this purpose. But last month I sold the car to a garage owner and transfer the loan to him. I also give notice to your bank about it.
Unfortunately, this month you overdrawn $310 from my account. when I call to inquiry about it. they told me that, last month I did not pay me loan amount that why they charged me. it is very injustice to me after I gave notice to your bank.
Please, take necessary attention about this matter and return the money to my account. also, give your employees enough warning that this does not in the future.
I look forward to receiving your response.
Yours faithfully,
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to complaining ...
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Line 7, column 143, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that my account is overdrawn 40 and that charged 0. that information is incorrect...
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Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...nt is overdrawn 40 and that charged 0. that information is incorrect. I am...
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Line 13, column 68, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... a savings account holder at your bank. I have a loan when i brought my new car. ...
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Line 13, column 87, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...holder at your bank. I have a loan when i brought my new car. So, every month I h...
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Line 13, column 276, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...also give notice to your bank about it. Unfortunately, this month you overdrawn ...
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Line 19, column 31, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'overdrew'?
Suggestion: overdrew
... Unfortunately, this month you overdrawn 10 from my account. when I call to inqu...
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Line 19, column 61, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...month you overdrawn 10 from my account. when I call to inquiry about it. they told m...
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Line 19, column 240, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to me after I gave notice to your bank. Please, take necessary attention about t...
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Line 25, column 88, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...ter and return the money to my account. also, give your employees enough warning tha...
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Line 45, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e. Yours faithfully, XYZ
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Line 51, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Yours faithfully, XYZ
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64804469274 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.423821419 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558659217877 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5760079794 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 52.0 76.5299724578 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.1875 16.8248392259 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.1875 4.34317383033 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.94845360825 253% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321909779997 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100038822038 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107552943492 0.0603063233224 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188337751434 0.12726935374 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116276780771 0.0580467560999 200% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.51 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.12 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.