You have had a bank account for a few years. Recently you received a letter from the bank stating that your account is $240 overdrawn and that you will be charged $70 which will be taken directly from your account. You know that this information is incorrect
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to convey my disappointment regarding a fine of $70 due to excessive withdrawal of $240 from my account.
Let me explain to you in more detail. I withdrew a total of $300 after looking at my bank account online where it stated that I have got my salary in my account. It's very obvious that a customer won't be able to withdraw the cash through the ATM machine if he/she doesn’t have money in a bank account. As my account was already credited; therefore, it allows me to withdraw the above-mentioned cash otherwise, I could have the error of insufficient balance.
I believe, it’s your internal error as my salary was updated online, whereas the software didn’t update the transaction in the system, as a result, the recovery team get the notification through system of over drawer, and they decided to sent me a letter per the bank’s policy to notify the customer with charges.
As it’s clearly a bank’s mistake, so I would request you to please notify your recovery department to withdraw the letter, and make sure to update my account in the system to avoid such confusion in the future.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best Regards,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 240, Rule ID: ATM_MACHINE[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant ('M' stands for 'machine'). Use simply 'ATM'.
Suggestion: ATM
...e able to withdraw the cash through the ATM machine if he/she doesn't have money in a ...
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Line 9, column 461, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...have the error of insufficient balance. I believe, it's your internal error...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, so, therefore, whereas, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90476190476 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87553209115 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590476190476 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 319.5 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.4737039671 44.8134815571 209% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 128.75 76.5299724578 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 16.8248392259 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256695218371 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109492417235 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573700568621 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150806556509 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056641727213 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 8.37731958763 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 70.7449484536 76% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.