One of my friend, Mr. Nakajima from Japan, is shifting to my city, Delhi next month, November. As he is coming to a country which has completely different culture, language and lifestyle, he may or may not like many things. So, to prepare for a comfortable transition, I have considered many factors that might proof to be beneficial.
First of all, I am sure that he would love authentic Indian food. During my stay in Tokyo, we used to go to Indian restaurants frequently and Nakajima always lauded about the Indian curry and naan. I believe he would enjoy the food even here as it is prepared with home-made spices, fresh vegetables and served in the typical Indian manner. As Indians consider guest equivalent to God, I have no doubt that he would enjoy the Indian hospitality and would not feel away from home.
Secondly, Delhi is a well-developed city that enjoys proximity to numerous ancient monuments and forts. With Taj Mahal (Agra)in north, Tughlakhabad Fort(Haryana) in south, Amber Fort (Jaipur) in west, and Varanasi in east, I am sure that he would have a enjoyablable time. While working, he can make short trips on weekends to visit these places and appreciate the true culture of India.
Unfortunately, one thing that he would hate about Delhi is the infamous blinding smog and air pollution during the months of November. Smog is at peak during this time and consequently, it is very hard to breathe outside. This is a major cause of concern as he is a Tuberclausis patient. He would have to take extra cautions and care. Moreover, along with poor condition of air, accident on roads and road rages cases are much higher than Japan, so, this will also be a major cause of concern for him.
Nevertheless, initially he would face a lot of problems in adapting to atmosphere, however, I am confident his stay would be comfortable and memorable one given the politeness and diligence nature of Indian people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 262, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... the east, I am sure that he would have a enjoyablable time. While working, he ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, no doubt, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77245508982 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72703052263 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586826347305 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1405768969 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.625 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 5.45110844103 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0674803906989 0.236089414692 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0246589548624 0.076458572812 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0146844304091 0.0737576698707 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0373236942789 0.150856017488 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00995698074746 0.0645574589148 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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