Food travels thousands of miles from producers to consumers. Some people think that it would be better for the environment and economy if people only ate the local food produced by farmers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the contemporary epoch, there is a heated argument that, people should eat foods produce locally not foreign. A lion's share of the society favors it. however, the rest goes adverse it. I completely agree with the notion. In my opinion, it is better for both economically and environmentally to produce local foods, it can cut the cost of foods as well as local farmers can get benefits from it. The following Paragraph's would explain the issue along with an apt example.
I see eye to eye, with the central idea for various reasons. First and foremost, locally produce are low in cost. Therefore, it can save a huge amount of money to the citizens. For example, foods which need to carry thousands of miles have transport and fuel more than locally carried foods. AS a result, people also benefit economically and use those money for other necessary things. In addition, Tracks and lorries carry food far dump fuel to reads and polluted air harms the environment. Furthermore, use of locally produce foods make local farmers financially healthy.
On the loggerhead, some critics go against the above discussed assertions. Firstly, if only local foods are available in markets, then people have miss the chance of testing and comparing varieties of foods. hence, they have only to taste which is only available in the local markets. For instance, american produce the brand of coffee in the world, so if we only use the local brand coffee and not to bring foreign brands in our market we miss taste of the world best products. As a result, it is an injustice to the people who want to taste some different. Another argument in favor of eating locally produced food is its nutrient value. locally grown food is nutritious because it is free of preservatives. also, locally grown fruits and vegetables are plucked when they ripen and this retains their nutritional content. By contrast, when they are transported from a distant place, they are plucked when they are still raw and then ripened with the help of chemicals. Regular consumption of such food items will lead to health problems in people.
In conclusion, by thinking our economical, environmental and benefits of local farmers we definitely need to eat local foods. But thinking about others people who want to change their taste we should keep foreign foods too.
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...taste we should keep foreign foods too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, still, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1961.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97715736041 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61658263327 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540609137056 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4262044838 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.44 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.76 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.48 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312338852615 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824003198848 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612434359682 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192646571907 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337619885618 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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