In some areas of the US a curfew is imposed in which teenagers are not allowed to be outdoors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
What is your opinion about this?
A curfew becomes one of the strict rules, applied in many parts of the US, about a night-time limit for adolescent due to ensure their safety and prevent them from juvenile delinquency. Therefore, they are only allowed to be out of their home if they are accompanied by an adult.
Children's safety is the main concern for all parents. As a result, they would like to espouse the regulation which could control the teenager's outdoor activities at the night. There are so many threatening dangers such as pedophiles and many crime activities for those especially girls who are still hanging around without adult's surveillance. A 2018 Harvard study warned that the quantity of crimes operated at the night increased by 30%. Meaning that the night activities are noxious for adolescents. The results in such a regulation keeping the children to stay safety.
What makes this regulation necessary to be applied? Admittedly, a curfew is the one of the feasible measures to prevent children from getting involved in juvenile delinquency such as alcohol and drug consumption. Presence of an adult or a parent dissuades adolescents from all the contagions that they possibly get from outsides. According to Kompas.com (2017), the quantity of Junior High School students who are alcoholics and heroin addicts increased 20% every year. Even though majority people think that the regulation can reduce children's freedom and rights, I still believe that it will more beneficial for children's future.
In conclusion, the time of the night is rightly justified due to children's safety and other unexpected unlawful behaviors. However, it is not thoroughly prohibit children to go out at the night as long as they are accompanied by their family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 405, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...quantity of Junior High School students who are alcoholics and heroin addicts increased...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, therefore, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20640569395 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81348180954 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590747330961 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6868750994 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227223479579 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743752255291 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728802273936 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141097176756 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588857327007 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.