Many people believe that having a fixed punishment for all crimes is more efficient .What are the advantages and disadvantage of having a fixed punishment?
Over the years,human beings has fought for the people who committed crimes. Some people believe that it is an efficient way to punish the people who carry out a crime by fixed punishment. However,there are both pros and cons to deciding to do this. In this essay, I will discuss some of the reasons why fixed punishment is so morally right and some of the challenges will be overcome.
Let's begin by looking at the advantages of having a fixed punishment. One of the main positives of a fixed retribution together other criminals is that it makes them warned. What I mean by this is that there is an invariable law which can punish all kinds of crime even it is petty or felony crime.
Secondly ,an equal punishment can lead the criminals to reduce crime as soon as they released from prison. According to crime statistics thousands of people who carry out a crime stop committing it as they may have more terrible crime than they have done before because of having a fixed punishment again.
Turning to the other side of the argument, dealing with other criminals is a major problem. Many criminals who committed petty crimes such as shoplifters and fraudsters are not actually a dangerous to society. They should have less punishment from murders,rapists and violent criminals. What's more , petty criminals may even learn how to commit more serious crimes when they have fixed punishment.
Another issue is that it can easy to being more serious criminals for the people who are less dangerous to society. In other words, when they are outside they may have more terrible crime than they have done before because of having a fixed punishment.
All these considered,having a fixed punishment is not efficient. Although,there are good sides of warning and stopping committing crime and drawbacks of learning and carrying out serious crimes,I strongly believe that negatives of having a fixed punishment eventually outweigh any positives.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
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Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03692307692 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79755442093 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492307692308 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
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Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4062645966 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2941176471 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1176470588 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 7.06120827912 77% => OK
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Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
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Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.157868369863 0.084324248473 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103437658851 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275055274892 0.151304729494 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357179587198 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
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dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
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linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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