Education
National and local authorities always pay great attention to our future generation while nowadays youngsters are likely to concentrate on computer games more than physical activities that could lead to manifold downsides for children’s development.
The main reason for this phenomenon is coming from the older generations themselves. firstly, by constructing many new infrastructures, people are detrimentally cutting off children’s playground. they do not have either a yard or park to play sports or outdoor activities, which therefore forces them to stay at home and find games to rewind themselves. For instance, one of my nephews who lives in a small flat in Ho Chi Minh City now does not know about how to play volleyball because he has never played it before in public place. he becomes introverted and reliable on lots of violated video games. secondly, parents are striving to make ends meet so they can not spend time playing sports with the children. Family means a lot in children’s formative years, it can shape a child’s personality in the first place. however, plenty of parents seem to neglect to care about their physical activity adoption, which causes many disadvantages for children’s enhancement.
As a result, this detrimental trend can come with a lot of bad effects, especially related to children’s physical and even mental condition. youngsters always sit around to play computer games without any movement, resulting in a signification increase in health-related diseases such as bad eyesight, usual gestures, etc. children who spend much time on screen cannot be flexible compared with those who do not. this also can decline the cognition of them which worsens the focus and result at school. A case in point is that nowadays more than 50% of children have to wear glasses due to bad eyesight causing by playing too many video games solely in Ho Chi Minh City, raising a difficulty in education. In conclusion, because of the fast-changing society, children have to suffer from lacking space for outdoor activities and it also comes from the irresponsibility of their parents, which causes manifold drawbacks. policymakers and governments have to immediately take action to solve this problem instead of letting it happen unrestrictively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Firstly
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Suggestion: They
...cutting off children's playground. they do not have either a yard or park to pl...
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Suggestion: He
...never played it before in public place. he becomes introverted and reliable on lot...
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Suggestion: Secondly
...liable on lots of violated video games. secondly, parents are striving to make ends meet...
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Suggestion: However
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Suggestion: Youngsters
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Suggestion: Policymakers
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1940.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34435261708 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21068677836 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617079889807 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9325150935 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.25 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6875 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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