In many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?
The society is now facing the growth of population, resulting in that people in urban areas choose to live alone or in a nuclear family rather than in a big family. While this trend is still a heated debate, I believe it has more advantages than downsides. this essay will discuss both perspectives.
On the one hand, living in small units can solve resident problems effectively. firstly, nowadays more and more people migrate to cities, this leads to the deficit of accommodation. therefore, regardless of villas or individual houses, it is challenging to have a sufficient house for many generations to live in thanks to the rising cost of real estate. As a result, people strive to seek a small flat to live by themselves or as a separated family. a case in point is that back to the past decade, people just spend 200-300 million dongs to own an apartment but now this price comes up to 2 to 3 billion dongs, which makes plenty of people unaffordable to purchase. Secondly, this can create manifold family-related problems among different generations. living together in one house can lead to the majority of conflicts between the aging population and the youngsters. consequently, this might detrimentally affect the living environment.
On the other hand, this phenomenon could come with some negative influences, especially relating to the warmth of the family’s members. a nuclear family, which just has parents and children, hardly can receive the love from other relatives such as grandparents, aunts, uncles, etc. like other traditional Vietnamese home. for instance, now the children do not recognize their relatives who were supposed to be their friends in childhood. besides, the distance between them and their grandparents will be lengthened.
In conclusion, although this trend can badly affect on family relationships, this can resolve manifold urgent problems which authorities are handling now.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23624595469 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01063075274 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618122977346 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.426710484 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1764705882 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1764705882 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.94117647059 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248226037894 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720252504313 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571134058819 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151774638205 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704651397131 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.