You have recently visited a museum. Now write a letter to your friend about the museum you have visited.
Write a letter to him/ her. In your letter, write:
- where you went
- what you saw there
- how you felt about it
Dear Shima
I hope you and your family are well. I am writing to share my pleasant experience that I recently gain about my visiting of the stunning location.
Last week I decided to start studying concerning the history of my country, therefore I have visited an amazing Art museum, located in Tehran, Iran. This site was a perfect place for raising my awareness about the background of my country.
The museum full of a wide variety of historical artefacts from prehistoric times that demonstrates Iranian origins. I had a chance to obvious artefacts and other objects of historical and cultural importance that is conserving in this museum. In fact, this visiting provide a unique learning experience for me to take full advantage of this opportunity. As you know veritably learning history and observing these places such as museums and palaces is important for finding a sense of identity. Visiting this museum was a cultural experience for me.
I advise you to visit this museum as soon as possible.
Warm wishes,
Mans
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m as soon as possible. Warm wishes, Mans
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, therefore, well, in fact, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08720930233 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79655393286 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622093023256 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6767933922 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5454545455 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212857815961 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848172153752 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072146809682 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16057688571 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726946008889 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.