The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the year 1990 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The below chart gives the information of percentage of British people donating money by range of 18-25,26-35,36-50,51-65 and greater than 65 in year 1990 and 2010.
Ovearll, the chart indicates that largest percentage of people who donated the charity are in higher age between 51to 65 in 1990 as well in 2010 . In this regard, the least percentage of people were younger people around 15% in 1990 and this percentage was significantly dropped by 10% in 2010.
In 1990, the largest proportion of people donated the money is 40% falls under the age group of 36-50, followed by 35% of british people from age group 51-65 .The percentage of people is constant at 30% in among the age group of 26-35 as well as greater than 65. The younger people were only 15%, who made the least contribution towards the charity.
In year 2010, the maximum percentage of british people was around 38% under the higher age of 51 to 65 who contributed towards the charity. The least percentage of people was only 5% from the younger people who did not show much interest towards the donation. The percentage of people were are constant rate of 35% under the age group of 36-50 as well as greater than 65. The age group of 26-35 was 24% who were seen contributing towards the charity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7399103139 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69961968221 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.412556053812 0.547539520022 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0471488395 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.444444444 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7777777778 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254979597143 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129009791053 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0921031980902 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203510337574 0.15604864568 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866339420053 0.0819641961636 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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