Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Friends are incredibly crucial for the shaping and developing of both individual and the society. With concerns of these perspectives, I believe it is more important to keep old friends than making new ones.

First, keeping old friends gives us chances to discuss important personal issues with friends, the issues that I may feel uncomfortable to talk about with new friends. Human kinds tend to open their hearts to old friends than new acquaintance, because old friends are more trust worthy. When attaching greater importance to keeping old friends, we build our friendship on the ground of trust, and we can feel free to talk about our personal issues and relax with old friends. It can be rather hard and hopeless when we need to talk to someone close, only to realize we have so many friends but no close ones.

Second, keeping old friends can enhance team spirit. Team spirit is important for both work and entertainment, and keeping old friends is a great way to build our sense of team. When conflict appears in a friendship, we may either abandon this friend and make a new one, or try to figure out a solution to the problem. If we are willing to keeping old friends, we will choose the latter and make ourselves more cooperative and friendly.

Third, in a larger sense, when individuals are willing to keep old friends, the whole society may be benefited since there are more trust among people. If we live in a society where everyone is more willing to make new friends instead of keeping old ones, we may be perplexed by such an environment because we may be busy dealing with too many new friends, yet lonely inside, because we hardly have anyone to talk about good old days and the likewise fantacy.

In conclusion, keeping old friends enable us to have lifetime-close friends to talk with, magically

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, likewise, may, second, so, third, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 317.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80757097792 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57356800887 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501577287066 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5617562061 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.230769231 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3846153846 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288089510756 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137321142265 0.076458572812 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773775066782 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202085628452 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342280715733 0.0645574589148 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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