The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of Australian men and women of different age groups who were doing regular physical activity in 2010.
Overall, Women of every age group are having approximately the same involvement in physical activities irrespective of the men whose percentages are varying vividly according to the age group.
Most of the males between the age of 15 to 24 are the one that are doing most of the physical activities and reaching up to a percentage of 52.8%. This interest percentage is decreasing for males as the age is increasing, they fell down to 42.2% and 39.5% for age groups 25 to 34 and 35 to 44 respectively. The percentage is quite increased for males of 45 to 54 by about 4%, which kept on increasing as the age factor is increasing and landed to 46.7% for the males of 65 and above.
Females on the other hand were having less interest for doing any physical exercise at the age of 15 to 24. This followed a continuous increase in the interest level for physical activities as the age of females is growing, landing to being 48.9 % for the age group 25 to 34 and 52.5% for the ones who are in the group of 35 to 44. After this specific age the interest percent is following a constant pace of being around 53% for age group of 45 to 64. But, for the women having age of 65 and above the interest percentage fell diversely to 47.1%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1136.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 252.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50793650794 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65772585012 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456349206349 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 352.8 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.1663120551 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.222222222 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355188504127 0.215688989381 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192453962229 0.103423049105 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.192735928823 0.0843802449381 228% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.328308384832 0.15604864568 210% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.223696295199 0.0819641961636 273% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.